Written for #FridayFrights, with the theme, Monster Movie Fan Fiction
Invisible Man
“Nine-One-One, what is your emergency?”
“Please send help, I was just raped.”
“Ma’am, is your attacker still there?”
“I don’t know. It was my ex –husband. I have a restraining
order against him… Oh my God, I think he’s still here.”
“Can you lock yourself into a room?”
“I’m in the closet… I think…”
“Ma’am? Are you still there? I’m sending officers out,
they’re on their way.”
***
Charlene opened her eyes and looked around. The room she was
in looked sterile. A hospital. She tried to sit up and then winced as pain shot
through her body.
“Take it easy, you’re pretty banged up.”
Charlene turned her head towards the voice. A woman she
didn’t recognize was standing next to the bed. “Who are you?”
“My name is Denise Sparks. I’m a detective. Do you know why
you are here?”
“Yes. I was raped. My ex-husband…”
“We’ve been trying to locate him, but he seems to have
vanished.”
Charlene chuckled, but the sound came out more like a bark.
Coughing, she reached for a cup of water, waving the detective off with a hand.
She took a sip and then leaned back against the mattress and smiled wanly at
the other woman. “Funny, your wording… He seems to have vanished. You don’t
know the half of it, and you aren’t going to find him, not unless he wants you
to.”
“Oh we’ll find him…”
“You don’t understand, Detective, he has vanished, as in he
is no longer visible.” She laughed, almost hysterically. “He’s the Invisible
Man.” Then she looked around the room, her face suddenly filled with fear. “He
might even be in the room with us right this moment. Are you here Dan? Where
are you?” She was becoming more and more frantic, looking around the room.
Suddenly she turned her head, seeing something in the corner that Denise could
not. “I KNOW YOU’RE THERE, DAN! Charlene picked up a vase of flowers from the
nightstand and through it across the room. The glass shattered on the wall and
water splattered across the floor.
Denise grabbed hold of Charlene’s arms, holding them down
while a nurse ran in, followed by a doctor.
“HE’S HERE,” Charlene screamed, fighting to free herself
from the detective’s grip. “I can smell
him!” She looked into Denise’s eyes, “I can smell his cologne. Can’t you? He’s
here. HE’S HERE!” She started sobbing then, while the doctor administered some
medicine with a syringe. As the drug began to take effect, Charlene’s eyes
began to close. Denise watched her for a few minutes and then headed for the
door. Charlene would be out for a while and she needed to fill her partner in
on what had just happened.
It had been decided that she would talk to her alone, since
rape victims responded better to female officers. This wasn’t strange, by any
sense of the word. Victims often seemed disoriented after. She’d never had one
claim she’d been raped by an invisible ex-husband before, but there was no
doubt she’d been attacked by someone. Denise paused just before she reached the
door. The water on the floor seemed to be moving, almost as though someone were
walking across it. When wet footprints appeared briefly on dry sections of the
floor, she took a step back.
“I’m just imagining things,” she told herself. “Charlene’s
panic attack is causing you to see things where they aren’t… plus you haven’t
had much sleep lately. That’s it, too many late nights. Besides, I’m sure there’s
a rational explanation for this.”
Then the hospital door opened, blowing the scent of
aftershave her way. She glanced into the hallway but no one was there. The door
had opened on its own. Then, just as suddenly as it opened, the door slammed
shut.
***
It was late by the time Denise got home. She’d filled her
partner in on everything that had happened in the hospital room, except for the
part where she saw wet footprints and a door open and close on its own. She
didn’t want to be taken off the case or sent to see the shrink. She wasn’t
crazy… just overworked. Unfortunately it wasn’t going to get better anytime
soon. Pouring a brandy, she set the files down she’d collected on Dan Brown.
He was a scientist, working for the government. Whatever he
was working on was top secret, she had a hard time getting what little
information she could. Still, what she had found, made for interesting reading.
A few of his associates had hinted that he’d been working on a cloaking device
for the military; something that a soldier could wear and turn on and off at
will. One moment you see him, the next you don’t.
“It was all theoretical of course,” one scientist said, when
he realized he’d said too much. “It will be years down the road before that
kind of technology actually exists, and the cost of maintaining it, well, it’s
not likely to ever happen.”
“But what if he did it?” She wondered. Finishing the last of
the brandy, she pushed the folder away from her. Her eyes were heavy and she
wouldn’t be able to stay awake much longer. Besides, she needed to be up early
and at the hospital when visiting hours began. Standing, she stretched, wincing
at the pain in her shoulders.
“Maybe a bath first, release some of this tension.”
A bath seemed to be what she needed. She slid into the water
and let her head fall against the back of the tub. Before long she was asleep
and dreaming about a man she couldn’t see. He was stroking her breasts,
squeezing the nipples between fingers that were both soft and cruel. She tried
to scream, but nothing came out. Then she felt herself being pushed down, her
head being forced into the water. She struggled, but she couldn’t fight him off…
she couldn’t even see him. A ringing pounded in her ears, thudding loudly,
urging her to fight her way back up. She
woke up, sputtering and spitting water out of her mouth. The telephone was
ringing in the next room.
Climbing out of the tub, she ignored the towel and hurried
for the phone. This late, it could only be her partner.
“What is it, John?”
She listened to the voice on the other end and then hung up
the phone. Charlene had been found dead an hour ago. She’d slit her wrists.
Returning to the bathroom, Denise grabbed a towel and began to dry off. Looking
in the mirror, she gasped and dropped the towel. Written across the glass with
lipstick were the words, Behind you.
Creepy. I LOVED IT! I was mesmerized by the picture you painted in this story. Hope you write more to it.
ReplyDeleteNice and creepy, great take on the Invisible Man story.
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